Peer Feedback

From my peer feedback I know that the colour scheme works well for my target audience and dressing my model in different costumes is something I need to continue doing for my fourth photo shoot. The line separators on my double page spread had positive feedback so I will be keeping them.
For my improvements I know that the boxes on the front cover need to cover less of the model, I could perhaps make them transparent. I need to take a close up and long shot for my contents page so that I have a variety of shots.

Third Photo Shoot

Here are some images taken from my third photo shoot. After adding them to my magazine I have decided that I will be using a different model for my fourth photo shoot because I feel that I need someone who looks older to best represent mainstream singer songwriter music. I will be taking two more studio shots, dressed in pink with bolder make up, as this reflects my research better.

Magazine Improvements 2

Third photo shoot plan

I have booked the studio for Monday to take my front cover image. My model Phoebe will wear a pink bomber jacket, black vest top, silver choker, pink eye make up and pink lipstick; this will match my colour scheme. I want to achieve a midshot image of her looking directly into the camera with her hands on her hips, pulling a fun posey face. I want to achieve this image but ensure the camera is properly focused, and leave less space above her head so she is more centralised.

 Next, I have decided to photograph Phoebe for my double page spread but in a stage setting as it fits the article better. I will re costume her in to a new dress and recreate this image I have already taken:

I also plan to photograph my second model Brooke for my contents page. I want to achieve a close up, focusing on her eyes and lips. Here are some images I will be basing my photograph on:

Next, I will photograph my third model Jonny for the contents page. I want to take a shot on stage to look like he is in a tour type of setting. I want to achieve a long shot of him standing on stage. I want to create an image with a similar pose to my research below:

Second Photo shoot

Here are the photos from my second photo shoot. I am happy with them but unfortunately some are out of focus so I will have to do the shoot again.